Comments on: Shinkan no Tsuki… http://jero-paraiso.blog.friendster.com/2005/08/shinkan-no-tsuki/ Destruction is at hand... My Shakra is stronger... Mon, 09 May 2011 06:53:53 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.2 By: matt-u http://jero-paraiso.blog.friendster.com/2005/08/shinkan-no-tsuki/#comment-4 matt-u Wed, 17 Aug 2005 10:46:12 +0000 http://jero-paraiso.blog.friendster.com/2005/08/shinkan-no-tsuki/#comment-4 hi! ang lalim mo pre... but can i criticize ur works a bit? hehe d k na mkakatanggi... in ur attempt to make the poem unfathomable, u gain lapses in grammar... be careful next time hehe pero promise ang galing mo... -- heheh... o nga no? de minsan kasi ginagawa ko nga tlaga yan hehehe... nice crit! maiimprove ako nyan!! (evil laugh!!) :)I) hi! ang lalim mo pre… but can i criticize ur works a bit? hehe d k na mkakatanggi…
in ur attempt to make the poem unfathomable, u gain lapses in grammar… be careful next time hehe pero promise ang galing mo…

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heheh… o nga no? de minsan kasi ginagawa ko nga tlaga yan hehehe…

nice crit! maiimprove ako nyan!! (evil laugh!!) :)I)

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